EL3221: Literary Stylistics
Second Tutorial

Discussion date: 30th August 2005

Relevant lecture notes: 2 & 3.

Tutorial Questions

Briefly discuss how nouns, verbs, adverbs and adjectives are used in the following passages. The first is Shakespeare's Sonnet no. 56, which is also referred to in your lecture on metaphor. The second is an extract from D. H. Lawrence's novel, Sons and Lovers. Are lexical sets of significance in your analysis of each of these features? You will realise that in a stylistic approach, it is not enough that you are able to isolate the features or categories, but you must also reflect on your emotional response towards them in the context of the passage. It does not matter if you cannot finish your discussion on the Lawrence passage, as you will be dealing with it again in the next tutorial.

The technicalities discussed in this and the next tutorials are relevant for your take-home essay, I hope these tutorials will prepare you not only for recognising the technicalities, but more importantly, how to interpret them in the context of the text.

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Sweet love, renew thy force; be it not said
Thy edge should blunter be than appetite,
Which but today by feeding is allayed,
Tomorrow sharpened in his former might.
So, love, be thou; although today thou fill
Thy hungry eyes even till they wink with fullness,
Tomorrow see again, and do not kill
The spirit of love with a perpetual dullness.
Let this sad interim like the ocean be
Which parts the shore where two contracted new
Come daily to the banks, that, when they see
Return of love, more blest be the view;
       As call it winter, which being full of care
       Makes summer's welcome thrice more wished, more rare.

Everything seemed so different, so unreal. There seemed no reason why people should go along the street, and houses pile up in the daylight. There seemed no reason why these things should occupy the space, instead of leaving it empty.  His friends talked to him: he heard the sounds, and he answered.  But why there should be the noise of speech he could not understand.

He was most himself when he was alone, or working hard and mechanically at the factory. In the latter case there was pure forgetfulness, when he lapsed from consciousness. But it had to come to an end. It hurt him so, that things had lost their reality.  The first snowdrops came. He saw the tiny drop-pearls among the grey. They would have given him the liveliest emotion at one time.  Now they were there, but they did not seem to mean anything. In a few moments they would cease to occupy that place, and just the space would be, where they had been. Tall, brilliant tram-cars ran along the street at night. It seemed almost a wonder they should trouble to rustle backwards and forwards. "Why trouble to go tilting down to Trent Bridges?" he asked of the big trams.  It seemed they just as well might NOT be as be.

The realest thing was the thick darkness at night. That seemed to him whole and comprehensible and restful. He could leave himself to it. Suddenly a piece of paper started near his feet and blew along down the pavement. He stood still, rigid, with clenched fists, a flame of agony going over him. And he saw again the sick-room, his mother, her eyes. Unconsciously he had been with her, in her company. The swift hop of the paper reminded him she was gone.  But he had been with her. He wanted everything to stand still, so that he could be with her again.

The days passed, the weeks. But everything seemed to have fused, gone into a conglomerated mass. He could not tell one day from another, one week from another, hardly one place from another.  Nothing was distinct or distinguishable. Often he lost himself for an hour at a time, could not remember what he had done.

One evening he came home late to his lodging. The fire was burning low; everybody was in bed. He threw on some more coal, glanced at the table, and decided he wanted no supper. Then he sat down in the arm-chair. It was perfectly still. He did not know anything, yet he saw the dim smoke wavering up the chimney.  Presently two mice came out, cautiously, nibbling the fallen crumbs.  He watched them as it were from a long way off. The church clock struck two. Far away he could hear the sharp clinking of the trucks on the railway. No, it was not they that were far away. They were there in their places. But where was he himself?

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